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  • Backdrop to scientist quotes

    Sun, 2010-10-17 02:28 -- John Hawks

    JR Minkel did a story on evolved sex differences for Scientific American ("Student Surveys Contradict Claims of Evolved Sex Differences"). Personally, I never take the results of student surveys to be good evidence about psychology. But the reason I'm pointing to the article is that Minkel posted on his blog the critical commentary he received from David Buss ("David Buss defends evolved sex differences (exclusive!)").

    In this case Buss wrote in response to an invitation. I wonder what would happen if this approach was more widespread -- articles about science accompanied by e-mail commentary from the scientists. Maybe the journals ought to pay them in that event. But there are a lot of crummy stories (not necessarily this one) where I, as a reader, wish I could read more of the scientist's opinion than the short quote that the journalist may have used.

    I suppose if I got called upon to do this, I'd get tired of it pretty quickly. Or be like, "Dude, read my blog."

  • Neandertal headlines

    Wed, 2010-10-06 17:29 -- John Hawks

    For two weeks I've been reading news feeds about how volcanoes killed the Neandertals. I mean, seriously:

    USA Today: "Volcanoes wiped out the Neanderthals?"

    National Geographic: "Volcanoes Killed Off Neanderthals, Study Suggests"

    NY Times: "Neanderthals’ Big Loss in Battle of the Elements"

    UPI: "Volcanic Winter Blamed for Neanderthal Extinction"

    The other stories of the last couple of weeks are some variant of "Neanderthals Were Not So Stupid After All". They make quite a juxtaposition.

    I think they could save some print by combining the stories: "No Longer Rock-Brained, Neandertals Kiss Ash Goodbye". Or "Neandertals Outwit Ice, Die By Fire."

    Oooh, oooh! "Misunderstood Neandertals Pursue Morose Creator To North Pole".

  • Saving science writing

    Tue, 2010-10-05 08:30 -- John Hawks

    Wired editor David Rowan wrote last week about "How to save science journalism". It's a long essay, discussing the problems traditional media outlets have supporting dedicated science reporting, some of the approaches that are attracting readers today, and some thoughts about the future.

    I think these last fall a little flat -- the advice basically boils down to, "blog more," and "find hidden stories."

  • Beware the wiki books

    Sun, 2010-10-03 13:11 -- John Hawks

    I was browsing on Amazon this morning, and found rather a surprising number of new books about human evolution. The thing is, I didn't recognize any of the authors' names.

    Now, you might well imagine how I was feeling about this. Is this one of those dreams, where you go to class on the last day, and it's the exam, and you didn't read any of the assigned books? I mean, who are these people? How are there specialized books on these topics, not involving any authors I'd ever heard of before? Have they been holding symposia I didn't know about?

    Then I noticed -- they're the same group of authors again and again.

    These people are selling print-on-demand, bound compilations of Wikipedia articles. It's the same group of "authors", so they're easy to recognize. I won't list or link them, but many readers might want to be aware -- if for no other reason, than that students might run across these. They've priced them very high -- higher than $70 -- so I can't imagine they actually sell any. But you never know -- that price and titles blend in with the scholarly edited volumes around them, which have similar low-ranking sales and often no reviews.

    Plus, they might in the end have the sense to drop the price to something that might actually attract potential buyers. So be aware!

  • PLoS Blogs

    Wed, 2010-09-01 15:44 -- John Hawks

    PLoS now has blogs. The announcement accentuates that they have an equal representation of scientists and science journalists.

    Neuroanthropology, authored by Daniel Lende and Greg Downey, will be of interest to many of my readers. John Rennie also has a "plog" as they're calling them, "The Gleaming Retort". "Speakeasy Science", by University of Wisconsin journalism professor Deborah Blum, has made the jump to PLoS as well.

  • Guardian science blogs

    Tue, 2010-08-31 09:01 -- John Hawks

    The Guardian now has a small network of science blogs. Their launch announcement includes this surprising factoid:

    You would not know it from general media coverage but, on the web, science is alive with remarkable debate. According to the Pew Research Centre, science accounts for 10% of all stories on blogs but only 1% of the stories in mainstream media coveage. (The Pew Research Center's Project for Excellence in Journalism looked at a year's news coverage starting from January 2009.)

    I'm not sure that science accounts for 10% of stories on science blogs, but the idea is irresistible. Just think if all the effort we spend on grant applications could be directed toward productive work!

  • Blog networks' problems links

    Fri, 2010-08-13 08:30 -- John Hawks

    I've collected several links over the past few days to people thinking about the role of blog networks in the science blogome. Several essays worth reading if you care about meta-navelgazing blog politics. Which of course I do, but many readers may not!

    My feeling is pretty simple -- I don't want to look like any other site, I don't want to be on a feed with people who talk about politics and religion all the time, and I want to be free to develop things like the bibliography section that enhance my research and can be widely shared. I've been invited on many networks in the past, and I've always turned down those invitations politely, leaving them open for the future. Maybe someday the up/down will change. But I think many people forget that the internet is already a network, and embedding oneself in a clique has many foreseeable costs.

    The discussions I'm linking have mostly to do with the strengths and weaknesses of networks. Since many science blogging networks have been sponsored or funded by publishers, the topic of publishers' interests is recurrent. It seems to me that a series of short commissioned and edited articles would beat a blog network easily for traffic reach and would give academics something that a blog typically doesn't -- a CV entry. One way of looking at the recent blog shakeup is that a lot of talent is out there looking for a home. But I look at things differently. How do you make the right mix of established voices and young, serious writers to create a room that people want to be in and come back to? A feed with 20 entries a day is relentless; when only 5 of those have anything to do with science, it may as well be satellite TV -- a lot of random junk, and several blowhards.

    Thirty scientists, giving their best 1000-word post once a month - - that would be a room to come back to every day. Or make it 20 regulars and solicit 10 guest spots in a given month. Commission some debates.

    On with the links:

    Hank Campbell: "Are Science Blogging Networks Dead?"

    Wide-open blogging has worked well for Examiner.com and AssociatedContent.com but science is a different animal. If you open it up to everyone, you get stuck with pseudoscience and that will drive out serious people. If you make it just about names and have editors micromanaging content and control like Nature Network (I have an account there because it was going to be an open Science 2.0-type site but in 2010 I cannot access my account or reset my password so maybe I am blocked) you get a Big Brother-ish mishmash...but if you just make it about inviting popular people, like Scienceblogs, your reputation becomes [hot-headed narcissists who write mostly about crap].

    Psi Wavefunction: "Conflict of interest is not unique to corporate blogging"

    I think there's a bigger problem: too many people, including academics themselves, live in this magical bubble where conflict of interest and the bias it drives somehow fail to exist in the bastion of rational thought that is academia. Research, as soon as it's peer-reviewed, is automatically politically-neutral and scientifically-accurate. That sort of thinking is outright delusional, and dangerous.

    David Crotty: Letting the inmates run the asylum: Are Blogging Networks Compatible with Publishing Business Plans?"

    Beyond the actual subject matter, communities tend to form personalities, and like it or not, that personality represents your brand. These personalities are hard to spot from the inside of a network. Social networks like these tend to be self-reinforcing, filled with back-patting and congratulations for brilliance being offered back and forth.

    John Rennie: "Do open networks threaten brands?"

    Rambunctious columnists and knowing how to handle them isn’t a new challenge. Editors in print and elsewhere have always sweated over how much to intrude on what columnists write. A reason that you hire a columnist is not just that he or she is good that he or she is reliably good with a minimum of supervision. As an editor, you realize that your columnists may sometimes take positions that the publication as a whole wouldn’t stand beside; you also realize that some of your audience will hold the publication responsible anyway. How and when you step in is part of what defines your editorial identity, but it also reflects how well you trust your audience to recognize and value the diversity of views you are presenting.

    And the article to which many of these links refer, by Virginia Heffernan in the NY Times Magazine, "Unnatural science":

    Under cover of intellectual rigor, the science bloggers — or many of the most visible ones, anyway — prosecute agendas so charged with bigotry that it doesn’t take a pun-happy French critic or a rapier-witted Cambridge atheist to call this whole ScienceBlogs enterprise what it is, or has become: class-war claptrap.

  • "Just-so stories" driving me crazy

    Tue, 2010-08-03 13:57 -- John Hawks

    NPR has been doing a special series of reports during their "Morning Edition" program called "The Human Edge", all about various aspects of human evolution. I think it's just wonderful that they're doing this, and the stories are available on the NPR website, which is also great.

    I've been out of town and so haven't been following closely. So I'm just noticing that some of these stories actually drive me up the wall. Every one of them is presented as what Stephen Jay Gould called a "just-so story".

    I'll take one of the latest articles as an example: "Food For Thought: Meat-Based Diet Made Us Smarter". The story begins with a short resume of the "expensive tissue hypothesis", with quotes from one of expensive tissue's main exponents, Leslie Aiello. This hypothesis is a serious one, which paleoanthropologists take seriously, and which has some empirical support in the comparative biology of primates. But here's how the story poses the hypothesis:

    "You can't have a large brain and big guts at the same time," explains Leslie Aiello, an anthropologist and director of the Wenner-Gren Foundation in New York City, which funds research on evolution. Digestion, she says, was the energy-hog of our primate ancestor's body. The brain was the poor stepsister who got the leftovers.

    ...

    Meat is packed with lots of calories and fat. Our brain — which uses about 20 times as much energy as the equivalent amount of muscle — piped up and said, "Please, sir, I want some more."

    As we got more, our guts shrank because we didn't need a giant vegetable processor any more. Our bodies could spend more energy on other things like building a bigger brain. Sorry, vegetarians, but eating meat apparently made our ancestors smarter — smart enough to make better tools, which in turn led to other changes, says Aiello.

    That's a "just-so story." How did meat make us smarter? Is it a magical meat property? If I fed enough meat to the local deer, would they get smarter? The expensive tissue hypothesis proposes an energetic trade-off, but doesn't provide any mechanism by which the evolution of smarter brains (or diet shift) would occur. A trade-off is simply "you can't have your cake and eat it too." It needn't say anything at all about how you bake a cake, or what happens if you can't eat it.

    I'm not anti-expensive tissue, I just want to recognize the limits of these explanatory hypotheses. Energy cannot explain everything about human cognitive evolution. It's an important constraint, but it cannot be the only one. Without some countervailing force, energy expenditure would always favor smaller brains. So we deserve some account of mechanism, not just energy budget.

    The story about endurance running attempts to tackle the issue of mechanism: "For Humans, Slow and Steady Running Won the Race". This story relies on interviews with Dan Lieberman, who favors the idea that Homo erectus adopted a form of long-distance running.

    "Most animals are designed for speed, for power, not for endurance," Lieberman explains, as we make a turn onto the bridge. "And we are a special species in having been selected for endurance, not speed."

    So we grew longer legs and lighter feet; the joints in the legs and pelvis got bigger to absorb a lot of impact; and we grew a bigger butt muscle.

    Lieberman says these and other changes allowed us to run down and exhaust prey, like antelopes. He notes that "persistence hunters" in Africa have been known to do that. And the payoff would've been big for early humans: lots of high-calorie meat to feed a bigger brain.

    Again, this is presented as a just-so story. It's a plausible narrative, but the article doesn't situate it in an evolutionary context. How exactly would you test this hypothesis? You could look at prey species profiles for early Homo (favoring low-endurance species), you could consider other cognitive and physiological requirements of persistence hunting (tracking ability, knowledge of water sources), you could look for evidence of gateway strategies (use of slow-acting poisons that require long-distance tracking). You could also try to refute alternative explanations for the anatomical features in question, such as their usefulness for long-distance walking, walking on irregular substrates, or simple allometry with body size or lifespan.

    These are serious hypotheses with literature and evidence supporting them. I just wish that they could be reported in a way that made it sound like paleoanthropologists are skeptical scientists!

  • Siphoning the firehose

    Tue, 2010-07-20 14:22 -- John Hawks

    Bora Zivkovic leaves ScienceBlogs and reminds us of the imprint that blogging has made on some careers in the last five years. Reading his thoughts on blogging and media, I found some similarities on something written by Richard Fernandez today: "The best of times".

    Editors of the future, if they still exist, will be graduated from Carnegie Mellon, Caltech or MIT rather than the Columbia School of Journalism. The journalists themselves I think, will be replaced by what may be called embedded sensors in place. The age of scribbler is over and the age of the literate practitioner and whistle blower has just begun. Interior debates within the industry, the professions and government will soon become the primary source of news. The primary challenge of reporting in the future will be to find entree into a circle to which one does not belong in order to write a story as an outsider. Absent that the insiders will generate the story on their own.

    In science, the firehose is open: Everyone publishes research, some very good, some bad, much useless. It's written in an obfuscating language, much of it in journals that are accessible only to the select.

    The "embedded sensors" are important -- giving perspective on how science is done and what may be coming next. The best science journalists are writing those stories, some of them almost are anthropologists of science.

    At the same time, every scientist of note is already an aggregator, choosing articles to read, to discuss in journal clubs, and possibly to cite. We're all editors of a sort, but few take the time to be good translators.

  • Mooning hominins

    Tue, 2010-07-13 15:19 -- John Hawks

    Gretchen sends this link: MSNBC has a list of "Eight Great American Discoveries in Science".

    We both agree that the list isn't really "science" so much as "technology and science" -- otherwise, why would "U.S. collaboration leads to the Internet" be on the list?

    But along with Ben Franklin and Thomas Hunt Morgan, and right after the moon landing we have ....

    ARDIPITHECUS!

    Ardi joins Lucy in the annals of American science

    American paleoanthropologist Donald Johanson's 1974 discovery of Lucy, a 3.2 million-year-old hominid named Australopithecus afarensis that walked upright, is often considered one of the greatest scientific discoveries in the field of human origins. The discovery of a 4.4 million-year-old hominid known as Ardi, short for Ardipithecus ramidus and described in a series of paper in 2009, may be an even bigger scientific breakthrough, according to Rothenberg.

    Ardi lived in woodlands and climbed on all fours in the trees, but was also capable walking on two feet — suggesting that this hallmark of human evolution occurred in the forest, not grasslands as previously believed. The discovery team, headed by Tim White of the University of California of Berkeley, said Ardi may be ancestral to Lucy. Such findings have brought scientists closer to identifying the common ancestors of chimpanzees and humans.

    Well, I'm glad that paleoanthropology made the list at all. But Johanson and White would be the first to remind MSNBC that these aren't just "American" discoveries -- both the discoveries and the science to understand them has been done by international teams working in Ethiopia.

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Neandertals

For years, I've worked on their bones. Now I'm working on their genes. Read more about the science studying these ancient people.

Denisova

From a finger bone of an ancient human came the record of a completely unexpected population. My lab is working on the science of the Denisova genome.

Acceleration

The advent of agriculture caused natural selection to speed up greatly in humans. We're uncovering some of the ways that populations have rapidly changed during the last 10,000 years.

Malapa

Just outside Johannesburg, the Malapa site is producing some of the most exciting finds in human evolution. This site is the headquarters of the Malapa Soft Tissue Project.